Mariofan9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gonna Get Itachi]

A good start.

I can clearly see the effort you put in this Flash. There are loads of tweens and it's a lengthy piece. To be constructive, allow me to tell you the two main problems:

- You need to use more symbols. Some characters just slide from place to place, obviously tweened. It should feel more alive, and this is achieved by adding a walking animation.
- The graphics are a bit messy. I think it'd be a good idea to add more detail like a bit of lighting and shading. Try to make it all look natural.

[Circle n' Square]

Short and Seriously Lacking Details

The Good.
- Excellent voice work

The Bad.
- Very short
- Little to no animation

Neutral Points.
- A simplistic design.

[Blabo]

It's good for a first Flash.

The presentation's nice and the sound effects are fun.
But your Flash is painfully short. Next time, don't mind how long it takes to make it and make something that takes longer. Even so, it's not a bad Flash. Keep practising now, and don't lose hope if people are negative about your Flash ( people are not overly positive about my work, either ).

[I hate christmas >:(]

There was as good as NOTHING to that!

Sorry, but you obviously didn't do your best with this. It messy, pointless and awful on the whole.

[A Paper Mario Christmas]

It's nice.

I like your Flash. There's a painful shortage of Paper Mario-related Flash, too.

Now, constructive critism:
I'm impressed by how you drew Count Bleck. Mario was a bit messy, but not bad. Maybe you can try to improve on drawing him a bit. For the rest, nice job.

Khonjin responds:

Thanks! Count Bleck took alot of time ad effort to draw, but he consisted of tweens.
Mario didn't take much effort to draw, however, animating him frame by fram does.
And I believe it balances things out.
Merry Christmas!
-Khawner

[The Postman Glitch]

Very Impressive

I am quite fond of this Flash work. TYou did an amazing job. At this moment, I'm not sure if I can think of any negative points, so let me point out extraordinarily good ones.

- Midna's voice. Both words and tone of voice were done incredibly well! Tell whoever did that voice it's a job well done.

- Good length. Your animation has the exact length I like. Not too short, but not overly long either.

- Animation. As I mentioned before, you did a superb job for such a long animation.

Hey, I hope you'll have time to make another superb animation some time later. I'll be hoping!

[The Mario Games]

A well done movie!

I must say this was a cool movie, especially the skateboarding.
Mario was a little fuzzy though, and some of the other sprites.
A sequel to this movie woud be a great thing with less fuzzy sprites. I'm looking forward to the next flash of this author!

[Star Wars 3: AOS]

Very nicely done!

This movie must have been made by a genious. I don't get why it is said to be violent though.... Because it isn't at all. It is one of the greatest Star Wars flash movies I have ever seen. Though the graphics coud be better.