Mariofan9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Can Break These Cuffs]

It's funny.

But the actual animation, though good, was rather short. It was mostly a video.
Even so, well done.

[Weed. Lol]

It's very simple

Hmm, what exactly should I point out? Everything needs some work. You could've animated the talking, the walk instead of just throwing in tweens. A litte more time spent on the art would've been good.

[I am Legend: Obvious]

The humor is good.

Yeah good job. It's an interesting way to voice your opinion. I hate to go against the description of your Flash, but the art needs a little more detail.

[Scorpion VS NES]

Ha. Great job.

There isn't a whole lot wrong with this. It could use more variation in animation, since it's basically constantly the same.

[CD-i Phillips is awesome]

Good job!

Humor, voice acting and art are all good, though all three need a little work. Especially the art could use a little more detail, such as shading.

[Sonic in Search for Love]

Interesting.

It's a decently funny movie. It really translates the feel of typical children's shows of this style. The voice acting is good. But the art could've used more image quality.

[Dig-Dug the Psycho Killer]

Ah.

That was a decently funny Flash movie. The voice acting and humor were decent, but next time try to throw some more detail and accuracy in the art. It wasn't bad, but it needs work.

[SW epII:Attack of Megaman]

I laughed.

Despite being mostly footage from Star Wars, the Mega Man sound effects and graphics were well-placed. Being a big Mega Man fan and a casual Star Wars fan, I really liked this Flash. Good job.

[The Closed Door]

Good.

This is your first animation? Well done. The animation is quite smooth and looks OK.
To be constructive though: The animation is a little bit generic. Stickmen are good ways to begin animating characters, of course, but you could've added more of a background.
Next to that, the end felt very cut off and didn't seem to have anything to do with the plot. You could've added a small ending where he doesn't open the door after all, for example, to create some sense of completion.

Don't get me wrong though, it's a great first effort.

leagers responds:

Thanks! If I end up remaking it, I'll definitely construct more of a physical background and story.

[equation wars]

OK then.

I'll organise my good and bad points with this Flash.

GOOD:
- Interesting concept.
- Good length.

BAD:
- You should've used motion tweens. The way everything moves looks very wooden, and a little smoothness really helps the animation to be honest.
- For a normal-sized Flash, very little is actually happening. The moving things are very small. Next time, make more things happen at a time.

All in all though, you did a decent enough job.

huw2k8 responds:

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