Mariofan9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Explode Harder]

Great job.

The animation is lengthy, looks like a real trailer, sound quality and humor are great. The art is nice.

Battosai810 responds:

Thanks :)

[MArio - BAd Trip]

The art was good.

Impressive art and animation. The tunes were fairly well-chosen. Even so, maybe it could've used a bit more length.

golfinho responds:

thank you!

[The Closed Door]

Good.

This is your first animation? Well done. The animation is quite smooth and looks OK.
To be constructive though: The animation is a little bit generic. Stickmen are good ways to begin animating characters, of course, but you could've added more of a background.
Next to that, the end felt very cut off and didn't seem to have anything to do with the plot. You could've added a small ending where he doesn't open the door after all, for example, to create some sense of completion.

Don't get me wrong though, it's a great first effort.

leagers responds:

Thanks! If I end up remaking it, I'll definitely construct more of a physical background and story.

[equation wars]

OK then.

I'll organise my good and bad points with this Flash.

GOOD:
- Interesting concept.
- Good length.

BAD:
- You should've used motion tweens. The way everything moves looks very wooden, and a little smoothness really helps the animation to be honest.
- For a normal-sized Flash, very little is actually happening. The moving things are very small. Next time, make more things happen at a time.

All in all though, you did a decent enough job.

huw2k8 responds:

thanks these are the kind of reveiwas that i learn from although i love all reveiws

[A Paper Mario Christmas]

It's nice.

I like your Flash. There's a painful shortage of Paper Mario-related Flash, too.

Now, constructive critism:
I'm impressed by how you drew Count Bleck. Mario was a bit messy, but not bad. Maybe you can try to improve on drawing him a bit. For the rest, nice job.

Khonjin responds:

Thanks! Count Bleck took alot of time ad effort to draw, but he consisted of tweens.
Mario didn't take much effort to draw, however, animating him frame by fram does.
And I believe it balances things out.
Merry Christmas!
-Khawner