It's difficult to write any critique, really...
The text animations, effects and timing were all perfect - and you have a gifted voice actor on board! There's little else to say.
You took the epitome of what is annoying, a stupid review, and made it into solid gold. That's no small feat, and more than worth a 10/10 score.
Overall, a good animation.
Since this is a student's work, allow me to point out the good and the bad:
The artwork is very nice (both backgrounds and creatures) and the concept is very well thought of.
The animation is very simple- almost exclusively built from motion tweens. More detailed, and possibly frame by frame animation are a must for more professional animations.
All in all, it's a great effort, though. It's clear effort was put into this.
The art is good, the animation needs work.
All the animation is slightly weak, but the art's good. The sound is a little confusing.
Heh good job.
It was sorta funny, mostly. Art and humor were good. The animation needs a little work, but for the rest good job.
The animation is lengthy, looks like a real trailer, sound quality and humor are great. The art is nice.
Animation and art were OK.
Yeah, the animation and art were good. But the Flash movie was extremely short, so your skills weren't really highlighted, and that's too bad.
Well, the art and animation were good. But what the heck?! That was weird.
It was a very funny Flash, but I would've liked to see more detail in the art and animation. The voice quality needs work.
The art was good.
Impressive art and animation. The tunes were fairly well-chosen. Even so, maybe it could've used a bit more length.
Good art, good humor, good voice acting.
Yep. It's all quite good. My only complaint would be the fact that the animation is slightly monotomous. In other words, not a whole lot of stuff is going on. Even so, what IS going on is pulled off quite well. So yeah, great job.
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